न होते हो तुम जब साथ
लगता हैं हर पल खाली सा
जैसे कोई न हो पास मेरे
चाहु तुझे में हमेशा अपने संग
क्या प्रयत्न करू तुझे संग रखने के लिए
कैसे बन गईं तेरी इतनी आदि
की खुद को ही गई हूं भूल
बस चाहु साथ तेरा हर पल
और न चाहु कुछ अब
आजा रंग दे मुझे
चाहु तेरे रंग में रंगना
A poem that is dripping with the honey of love and longing! The last two lines summed it up for me - when you love someone so much that you feel one with them.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully penned. Its full of emotions. Only someone who is deeply in love with someone can write like this.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful lines. I am touched by the way you have expressed emotions. In few words you have conveyed a lot, which is not an easy task
ReplyDeleteloosing oneself in another - your words have captured that emotional journey and self questioning so well.
ReplyDeleteA poem with so many unspoken feelings and emotions for loved one. Description of true love in poem
ReplyDeleteSuch a beautifully penned poem which reflects the true emotions of a poet, her inner feelings and off course her creative intellect-- moved by your creative sense
ReplyDeleteThat's a lovely expression of love and longing.... together these make the heart fly and flutter!! Loved reading this Hindi poem...
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautiful poetry, I read it twice. And I can understand the emotion when we are away from loved ones.
ReplyDeleteThis is the beauty of poems- it can convey the most difficult to express, emotions with so much ease in so less of the lines, beautiful words.
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